week 11 story: Little Bear
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Raising Little Bear
Attack of Little Bear
Without Little Bear
The old woman procrastinated sending Little Bear away. But finally, a day with no clouds arrived and she said, "Okay Little Bear it is time for you to go." The old woman couldn't imagine sleeping in her bed without Little Bear and began to weep. The two embraced each other, and as Little Bear walked off the old woman rubbed oil and soot down one side. Now, in the north there is a legend of a bear the size of an iceberg, an excellent hunter, with a large black mark on his side.
| Little Bear after his mom. Source: WikiMedia Commons |
Author's Note:
This original story is about a foster mom who begins to care for bear cub. I kept almost everything close to the original version. I definitely left out a few parts of the story but I didn't seem them necessary to tell the story the way I did. She took him in, trained him to behave, to play gentle, and be kind to humans. I wanted to edit how long the actual story was so I chose to retell using 3 micro fiction stories. I thought this was a good choice to do for this story since there 3 distinct periods within the original story: before the bear, with the bear, and the bear leaving. The original story mentions ice fishing, so I figured Little Bear would be a polar bear, since the black marking showed up so well.
The Woman Who Had a Bear as a Foster-Son


Hi Gabby!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story a lot! I kept thinking of the movie brother bear because of the loving nature of Little Bear in this story. I really hate that an outsider had to come in and ruin everything because it seemed like the village fully accepted Little Bear and liked his help with hunting. I wonder why this outside felt it was necessary to harm Little Bear in the first place. Anyways, great job!
Hi Gabby! I loved reading your story, Little Bear. I enjoyed how you decided to write three mini stories versus one long story. I enjoy reading mini stories more than long ones because I sometimes lose interest in long stories. You did a great job with your word choice and grammar. That is an impressive skill and keeps your story professional. I think the title of your story is so cute, it makes the reader, like myself, want to learn more. Great job!
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